Omari and the People
by Stephen Whitfield
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In an ancient time, a people made homeless by a devastating fire are led across a treacherous desert by a thrill-seeking thief, to a land he doesn't believe exists - and he started the fire.
In a squalid ancient city on the edge of a desert (based on descriptions of the African Sahara’s Empty Quarter,) a weary, thrill-seeking thief named Omari sets his home on fire to start anew and cover his many crimes. When the entire city is unintentionally destroyed by the flames, the cornered thief tells the displaced people a lie about a better place to which only he can lead them, across the desert. With the help of an aged, mysterious woman who knows a better place actually does exist, they set out. The disparate people must come together to fight their way through bandits, storms, epidemics, and more. As a result of Omari's involvement with Saba, a fiercely independent woman who is out to break him in the pay of a merchant whom he has offended, his ability to lead - his very life - is jeopardized.
As was his way, bin Aswad took no part in the celebration, and actually enjoyed his time alone as everyone else danced, sang and ate. Indeed, he had always found great pleasure in his love of numbers – calculating expenses, inventories and ultimately, profits. Despite Omari’s warnings about making money from the needs of others, bin Aswad had found it profitable to provide specialty clothing for those who could afford it. He found that some people paid well for themselves and or their family to look good in new clothing, and he was very clever in the re-use of old clothes to make new garments, as his cloth supply dwindled. Instead of being rich in coin, he now had more than his share of food, water, tools and other valuables.
He was happily humming a tuneless melody while he sat counting a number of small gems, when his tent flap flew open. A stunning young woman moved in quickly and stood over him. Astonished, he scrambled backwards with his eyes and mouth wide open, spilling the gems onto the tent floor.
“Ho, bin Aswad. Easy,” said the woman in a husky voice, and a bright smile that revealed white, even teeth. “I wish you no harm.” She raised her palms to calm his fright and sat down. “In fact, I believe I might be of some service to you. My name is Saba Khan. Did you drop something?”
No longer terrified, bin Aswad was still too surprised and embarrassed to form any reply, except to start picking up his gems while glancing up at the stranger. At first glance, Saba Khan possessed what might be called an extraordinary beauty – enough to turn heads, and very pleasing to the eye. In bin Aswad’s lamplight, her complexion was a satiny smooth, golden brown that seemed to blend into the darkness. Her finely sculpted face framed dark amber, almond-shaped eyes, which made him pause. For the brief moment he held her gaze, he was so struck by their sheer intensity, intelligence and perceptiveness that he stopped picking up his gems. His attitude changed to awe and he was willing, even eager to hear what she had to say.
“How do you know my name?” he mumbled, too awestruck to ask all the questions in his mind.
“You are well-known, bin Aswad. You have many customers—people you talk to and trade with. Some of the things you receive in trade are precious gems, such as that one you missed, just there.” She pointed a slender finger at a ruby behind him.
“That gets people’s attention. Some of the things you’ve said are bound to get even more attention – such as the fact that you are unhappy with Master Omari’s leadership.” She leaned forward and opened her eyes wide. “Allow me to offer you some free advice – trade your gems away and keep your opinions to yourself.”
Bin Aswad noticed the hilt of a dagger in her waistband. As the idea of danger began to form in his mind, beads of sweat broke out on his upper lip. “That’s some strong advice,” he said, in an effort to sound self-assured. “What do you have to do with my opinions or my gems?”
Saba Khan chuckled. “I’m not here to harm you, bin Aswad. I’m here to suggest that I might be able to help you solve your problem with Master Omari…for the cost of some of your gems.” She raised her brow and tilted her head to the side. “Are you interested in seeing someone else in charge of the caravan? Someone more sensitive to your business interests?”
He frowned and leaned forward. “And how would you…”
“You don’t need to know that,” she said. “All you need to know is if you pay my price, your satisfaction is guaranteed.”
He stared at the woman in amazement. “What do you do? Are you some kind of killer? I don’t want to kill anyone.”
“I make things happen,” she replied. “And don’t worry; you don’t have enough gems for anyone to be killed. Not even that great blue jewel you have hidden in your robe.”
Bin Aswad’s eyes widened again. “You know about the jewel?”
“That is why I’m here,” she said in a low voice. “Remember my first advice? You’re not going to be able to hang onto such a stone much longer anyway. Too many people know about it. Right now, all you have to do is say ‘yes’ to the deal. If you do, I will give you more details later. Of course, whether you agree or not, I must refer you back to the second advice – keep your business to yourself. Now, do we have a deal?” She leaned forward and smiled as if she knew the answer.
Praise for the Book
"I just loved this book! The story of this people was so fascinating I had to drop everything else I was reading and concentrate only on this. [...] This book is highly recommended to anyone looking for an epic adventure, a tale of friendship, love and betrayals with a touch of magical realism." ~ Book For Thought
" ... if you love an epic novel with a charismatic but troubled hero and multi dimensional characters around every corner, you can't do better than this one. I'm keeping this one in my library without a doubt and can only sit impatiently in the hopes that the author will make a sequel." ~ A. Stacco
"I never thought of myself as an avid reader, but the cover's exotic artwork and alluring excerpt arose my curiosity; the tension, the romances, the mysteries, the climax definitely kept my attention." ~ J.J.
"Omari and the People is an extraordinary epic adventure full of friendship, love, loss, betrayals and survival. The touch of magical realism is what brings the story full circle. Beautifully written, the author, Stephen Whitfield has done an amazing job with his characters and storyline from beginning until the end. He is a gifted storyteller and I can't wait for another book from him. [...] This is a great action-packed tale that will stand the test of time. Truly Great Read!!!! Highly Recommended!!" ~ BookLoverRome
"This is a beautifully written piece. The author does a good job describing the scenery and the tension with the characters. The book is filled with suspense and intrigue. It is a captivating piece from cover to cover. This is not your typical novel. The author successfully integrates the themes of leadership, love, loss, hope and survival into a smart and engrossing book." ~ Stephen A. Drake
"This was an action-packed read in an interesting setting with good character development; a bit of fantasy, adventure, and romance all bundled into a real page turner. I found myself absorbed in the story, as if transported to the scene of the events as they unfolded. Would definitely recommend!" ~ Linda
About the Author
Chicago-born Stephen Whitfield began writing as a Marine Corps print journalist. His writing has appeared in military publications, as well as the Kansas City Star and the Jersey Journal. He holds degrees from Loyola University Chicago, Chicago Theological Seminary, and Indiana University. Stephen currently resides near Orlando, Florida.